My own narrative by Taryn

The Friends And The Forest Hike.

One summers day there were three friends named Perrie, Danielle and Louise . Perrie had long straight brown hair and green eyes, Louise had short black hair and blue eyes and Danielle had curly long blonde hair and brown eyes. Perrie is always kind, Louise is helpful and Danielle smiles like a flower blooming and is always willing to help out.

 The three friends decided to go on a hike in the forest. They packed a nice big lunch and some spare clothes. They then started their adventure. When they got into the forest they put their backpacks on and started to hike. When they got halfway into the forest it got as dark as the night sky and as scary as an ugly monster.. Louise was starting to get really scared she just wanted to turn around and go back home but they couldn’t because they were already halfway. There was no turning back now.

 Then Perrie noticed something behind the trees, she screamed “ LOUISE, DANIELLE THERE IS SOMETHING BEHIND THOSE TREES!”. Danielle ran over and said “ Where?, where?” She panicked. Louise didn’t believe them, she was just minding her own business and playing with some sticks in one of the trees facing the other way because she just thought they were trying to scare her but they weren’t. This was real! Then Perrie and Danielle both screamed so loud at the same time and said “LOOK THERE IS SOMETHING RED THATS GLOWING BEHIND THOSE TREES!”.

 Then they noticed it was a vicious bear, so they ran as fast as they could, but there was a problem: the bear got distracted by them running and started chasing after them. They had left Louise by herself. She still thought they were there until she turned around and saw that they were gone. It was silent. She was starting to get really, really scared. Then she heard Perrie scream.


 She was happy that they weren’t too far away. She also was scared because her friend was screaming. She said to herself “ I better go and help them” So she did. She followed the sounds of the screaming and ran to them to help. She saw the vicious bear and screamed “ Oh my gosh you guys were right! There was something behind the bush!”

She went to help Perrie first because Perrie was in the bear’s paws. The bear had picked her up. Perrie and Danielle were panicking. Louise said “ Just stay there. Don’t move, I’m coming to save you!”. So Louise went on the top of a tree and made a swing from a vine. then she swung down and grabbed Perrie quickly out of the bears paws. Then Perrie Climbed to the top of the tree and helped Louise save Danielle. Danielle was on the bear’s head and she couldn’t get down so Louise had to do the same thing as what she did with Perrie. She swung down one more time and grabbed Danielle. Danielle and Perrie were very thankful to Louise because she had saved the day!

 Then a man from Animal Rescue came and he saw the bear then he shot the bear with a dart gun to make it fall asleep so that he could put the bear in the truck and take it back to the wild. Luckily the girl’s weren’t hurt, just a bit sore but they got better and lived happily ever after! The End